Inquiry 2 Zero Draft

Sexual assault is a very common topic in research, and it can have many different effects on the victim and come in many different ways.  Sexual assault is also very prevalent, with one in five girls and one in twenty boys being a victim of child abuse.  For adolescents, three out of four cases of sexual assault are by someone that the victim knows (Child Sexual Abuse Statistics).  In The Perks of Being a Wallflower, the impact of the intra-familial sexual assault he experienced corresponds correctly to science and knowledge about the reality of the trauma and its psychological effects.

One of the most prevalent effects of intra-familial sexual abuse deal with the sexuality of the victim.  [insert support here]

Potentially the most significant effect of intra-familial abuse, and the effect that is primarily exclusive to abuse within the family, is the sense of betrayal and loss of trust developed by the victim.  It can often build tensions within the entire family, not just the victim and his or her abuser.  In Johnson and Cheffer’s case study, Janet, the subject of intra-familial sexual assault, was angry with her mother because she felt as though her mother had not protected her when she expressed her assault by her step-father.  Her mother, Carol, did in fact mention at the beginning of Janet’s therapy that Janet was the one responsible for her husband being in jail.  [continue with the article for parents about how to respond]

In  The Perks of Being a Wallflower, Charlie has a complex relationship with his aunt.  He loves her very much, as she always paid great attention to her, but her sexual abuse of him had great effects on him and his mental state. . .

7 thoughts on “Inquiry 2 Zero Draft”

  1. This topic seems very interesting. I never thought of analyzing sexual abuse in Perks of Being a Wallflower. You have gotten a good start. I really like your thesis, and I think it will shed a new light on the way people see this book/movie. Your research looks good and seems pertinent to your topic as well.

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  2. I think that your thesis is excellent, except instead of saying “he”, you might want to say “Charlie”, as you do not mention him before and your reader has no idea who “he” is. I would also work on some transitions in your opening paragraph to make your paragraph flow more smoothly into your thesis, maybe talking about Perks or Charlie before the thesis could help with this.

    It looks like your essay is off to a good start, you seem to know exactly what you will write in your body paragraphs and how you will back your writing up with evidence from the text. good job!

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  3. You have a lot of good ideas in your 2B Zero Draft and they are organized very well. I can tell you’ve put a lot of though into this. With more details and specific examples from the novel, I think your paper is on the right track. Your thesis is very good– I wouldn’t change it at all.

    Have you thought about including the idea of sexual abuse found within the novel in your opening sentence within your introduction. Then go into the statistics and end it with your thesis. I think this would help reinforce your idea.

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